me love Miyavi

Made another poem..

The sounds of sirens echoing through her ears
flashing lights of ambulances blinded her eyes
police cars everywhere.

She seems not to care as the world began to be filled with fear
Not caring what's happening to this world
Not caring at all
Knowing she's just going to die in this world full of fear
So what's the point of caring ?

I'm not sure if this even sounds like a poem.
please reply so I know what u guys think for I'm not an expert of writing poems

Hi!!!I made another poem because my teacher told us that we didn't really follow the directions or didn't do it right,so here it is:

Whenever I walk,
If I see you there,
Although you're not,
Because you don't care,
I gave you my heart and my body.

Hi!!I haven't been here for a long time now...anyways I made a new poem
here it is:
Whenever I listen to the music,
If I hear you sing,
Wherever I go,
Your faint hollow voice echoes to my ear,
Although you're far away,
When I die,
I will surely reach to you.

On Saturday I went to Korea Town with my friends and with my 2 sisters.It was soooo fun there.When we were on the Korea Town mall I felt like I was really in Korea.We went in the store called Music Plaza.In there we we saw SUPER JUNIOR,DBSK,Rain,and a Big Bang posters and c.d's .My friends,my sisters and I were really noisy and we took a picture of the posters.Also we saw a MY GIRL poster!!!We also took a picture of it.There was a My Girl DVD there but it caused about 80 dollars...sucks but anyways we were soooo happy.And I almost forgot we saw a Super Junior T c.d and we baught it which was their new one..ahahaha.We got a free poster of Super Junior too...Then we went in to a very cute shop baught cute stuff there.So,anyways it was really exciting and fun..here are some of the picturesmy older sister edited the pictures not me)
 

Super Junior!!                   My sister edited this.She sucks at taking pics

there are more pics but i'm just too impatient waiting for the pic to load so. bai bai

aaaahhhhhhh Sungmin...!!! awwwwww he's winking at me...ahahahaha